Network Administrator Resume Sample - Before and After

First and foremost, the "before" resume for this network administrator has a focus on duties instead of accomplishments. Hiring professionals want to know what the candidate has done that made a difference to his current and former employers.

The “after” version features accomplishments that are easy to see and attract the reader by immediately revealing what they are looking for. In addition to this, improvements by the professional writer include: a descriptive title followed by a summary that clearly states who the person is professionally and what they would bring to the company. This is presented in a condensed style that tells the reader what they want to know in the first 15 seconds.